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Some Suggestions for More Robust Characters

April 3, 2017

Author’s Note: this started like an excerpt from a memoir, but eventually turned back to some fair reminders for characterization.

There are two aspects that are powerful when writing about characters, as everybody can relate to them on some level: nostalgia and jobs.  Everybody has their moments when they think back fondly on some period of their life, or when some aspect of their life reminds them of the way things were. Everybody has worked, does work, or will work at some sort of job, even if the job isn’t exactly the paying kind.  In order to create richer characters, and in order to draw readers into your characters’ world, bring relevant aspects of the characters’ pasts, as well as their roles in society into your narrative.

I’ve been pretty nostalgic lately.  Today, we went on a hike that reminded me of when I was first dating my wife.  We discussed her grandmother and her childhood friend, who are both since deceased.  Those memories spurred more memories, and so on.  I was fortunately enough to know her grandmother before she passed, and discussion of her grandmother hiking that trail reminded me of seeing this woman, then over 80, cutting the rug with her granddaughter at our wedding.  Aside from that, some alfalfa sprouts in my sandwich reminded me of sandwiches that my father used to order when I was a kid; I don’t know why he stopped having them, but you never see alfalfa on the menu anymore.  After that, tortellini with pesto reminded me of my childhood friend.  The point is, memories can flare and smolder like a campfire, depending on the kindling.

When discussing a character, and having that character advance through that plot, nostalgia doesn’t need to play a prominent factor.  However, consider all of the times you’ve been rolling down Broadway and you remember that swing-set that was there when you were a kid, or how that old theater reminds you of your first kiss.  Your characters aren’t going to reminisce of times passed when they’re busy hunting a serial killer, nor will they necessarily reminisce of times passed when they’re waiting for the bus, but there should be something there that hints at a time before your story began.

I’m in my early 30s.  My tenth college reunion is in the rear view mirror, and I’ll be closing in on forty by the time my next reunion (high school) takes place.  What this means, of course, is that I am part of our nation’s workforce. Regardless of what adults do in the workforce, from custodian to CEO, work takes up a great deal of their time.  How they go about their work, and what they feel about their work, is an important part of their character, as well.  My father repeats this one-liner from a movie (I think it might be the barbershop scene in Gran Torino) that goes something like “real men complain about their jobs.” It’s funny, but we all have stories from our jobs, whether mild frustrations or flat out grievances, peppering a character’s conversations and thoughts with complaints, worries, or even successes in their jobs makes for a more believable characterization overall.

For all of my fellow writers who are out there trying to paint a picture, use these thoughts and experiences to shape your character.  Is your character a former high school footballer who is stuck in the kitchen at the local diner?  Put in a little something about him grumbling about the big game.  Does your character know she is paid less than the manager’s underqualified nephew?  Add an interaction between the two of them!


Spiritual Traction

October 24, 2011

“We are here to make spiritual traction. Not to be slipping and sliding, shucking and jiving”

– Carlos Santana, in an address to Mission High School, San Francisco, CA 10/24/2011

I promised my wife that I would get to bed earlier tonight, but on the way home from basketball, all of twenty minutes ago, I heard this sound byte over the radio, and it was one of those sound bytes that I think should be pasted all over the internet. So far, I haven’t been able to find it, as Doug Sovern’s byte on the KCBS website is not the same as the one they just broadcast on the air. Unfortunately, the real meaning is at the end, and it is slightly different than what Santana posted on his Facebook earlier this year.

I’ve done a lot of planning for NaNoWriMo, and have been thinking about plans for both writing and for life. A lot has changed since the last time I stepped into a classroom, but when I was teaching, it took every waking moment just to accomplish that task–and it became just that, a task. My apologies to my former students that read this and think whatever they may think. I appreciated you, but I didn’t have the rest or energy to fully appreciate you, and I didn’t have the atmosphere to let the real stars shine. My Fakin’ Bacon students (especially, but not exclusively) will someday shine because of their hard work, intelligence, and intellectual curiosity. They were all my favorites, and I am glad to be able to check in with them every now again via Facebook. I can’t wait to someday see their names behind the honorifics of “senator,” “Pulitzer Prize winner,” “Nobel Prize Winner,” or “Professor,” because I know that they have it in them.

I have always wanted to write, to spin stories, to share tales, and to entertain through words. I have gained my “spiritual traction” (if one can call it that) through a series of hesitant first steps. I hope that someday I can have the authority to share something as profound as what Santana shared with the Mission High student body. In the meantime, may I merely suggest that you all follow your passions, gain that spiritual traction, and strive for your goals.

In 7 days (and something like twelve or eighteen hours), I will embark on my second NaNoWriMo with the intent of winning the challenge again. To all of you out there that are doing the same, best of luck. We share a common passion.

Honey, I’m coming to bed soon. I promise.

–Jim Owen, Author

Edit: And, to throw a wrench in the works, I may need to remind a few of you of the almost non sequitur that Carlos Santana gave during a broadcast of a Giants baseball game a couple of years ago. His comment, “hate and fear are so costly; love is for free,” was ridiculed on the air by several different stations.  It was part of a greater monologue that involved discussing Santana’s charity interests, but it was fairly clear that the monologue itself was not quite what Miller and Fleming expected.